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Revision of Fiction (The Magical Flower)
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... Alia asked,” so, what happen next and where is my grandmother? Atuk Leman answered it,” After …
(view changes)...Alia asked,” so, what happen next and where is my grandmother? Atuk Leman answered it,” After three month, I decide to marry her, your grandmother, Sofea. We life together in this house with happiness and peaceful with the engross smell is always with her. But it is not longer. Sofea suddenly fall sick. She does not eat anything and his body becomes weak. In that time, Sofea want me to take her to the flower place. I quickly take her to the place and when we arrived at that place. In that time, Sofea eye was closed. Suddenly Sofea was floating with his body was shinning with white shine. Sofea stand in front of me and told me that actually, she and the flower is very related to each other. That why, when I followed you to your home in a long times, I getting sick and my body become weak. I must smell the fragrance of the flower everyday. On that time, I know his condition and Sofea want me to let her go. But I don’t want let him disappeared in my life and I don’t want to lose it. After that, I decided to permit Sofea live in that place and I will always come to see her”.
Amin was asking, “What about Ponti, Atuk? Atuk Leman answered,” that is my fault. On the time I decided to permit Sofea live at the place, I doesn’t know that Sofae was pregnant”. “So, what must we do to Ponti now? Her condition is bad now,” ask Alia. Atuk Leman said, “We must take Ponti to the place you all have found her, at the jungle”.
...because sheknow thatthought shedoes not live with them anymore because she is in the different world.can't meet her mate anymore.
Sofea has come to Atuk Leman and say,” I’m so very sorry because I did not tell you that in that time, I was pregnant Ponti. That why, Ponti’s instinct is more like normal human. She cans life in two different worlds. But in the same time, she needs the fragrance of the flower to make her in the good health”.
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Flowers
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Now , I want to share about my first impression about the drawing. My first impression, I see a bo…
Now , I want to share about my first impression about the drawing. My first impression, I see a bouquet of orchids with the decoration. Orchid… I think everybody now the flower and love it. But not many people know how to grow and care the orchid in the best condition. My mum, who is a housewife but very interested and love orchid very much. Every part of the day, she with her orchid garden. In the morning, afternoon, evening and also in the night… my mum said Orchid flowers are in one word, breathtaking. No one can disagree with this. What is also amazing is that no other plant family has as many different flowers as does the orchid family. Within the Orchidaceae, there are many types of specializations. Amongst the best known are the structural variations in the flowers that encourage pollination by attracting particular species of insects, bats, or birds.(view changes)
In growing orchid flower, we must know some orchid basics. There are the humidity, light and air, watering, temperature and potting. Firstly humidity, Orchid trees needs about 60% of humidity. The best way to grow orchid is in a greenhouse. Otherwise we can grow it in a humidity tray, which you can from the store in your locality. You can also make a humidity tray yourself. Fill saucers or tray with rock and water. Then keep the orchid on it. Second is light and air, If you are growing orchids inside then it doesn't need sunlight much. Ventilation is very important for indoor orchids. For that you can either open the windows of the room or switch on the fan. This helps the orchids to remain pest and bacteria-free. After that, about watering. Lift up the orchid hanging roots and see to it if it needs water. For watering filtered water is the best option. Orchids prefer weak fertilizer solution. After one fertilizer application you must have 3-4 watering intervals and then after that there will be second fertilizer application. If this routine of watering and fertilization is not maintained then the fertilizer will remain unabsorbed and it will affect the health of the orchids. Next is about temperature. This is the most important feature for healthy orchid growth. Some orchids are adjusted to the warm temperature compared to others who are friendlier to the cool temperature. If it gets hotter then cool them by watering. Lastly is about potting. Change the pot of orchid flowers after every 1-2 year. The best way to judge the time of pot changing is when the plant becomes old.
My mum orchid garden is outdoor gardening. In making outdoor gardening, we should follow the important aspects of gardening, which includes the right choice of tools, choice of location, irrigation, soil, use of fertilizers, manure etc. The basic tools required for outdoor gardening include hoe, rake, shovel, water hose or sprinkler and garden stakes. It is easier to work with them only if you keep them in good working condition. Wash them properly after finishing the work. Apply a thin coat of petroleum jelly on the sharp edges of the tools, so that they are protected from rust. Choose a moisture free place for storing the tools. Gardening starts with proper planning. Therefore, always start the project with a rough sketch of the plan. Next, the choose the location. The best location for creating a landscape is the place that gets at least six hours of direct sunlight a day. In addition, the place should have plenty of drainage. To begin the project of outdoor gardening, we may start with the plants that are easy to grow, such as tomato, lettuce or carrots. We may grow the plants either from seedlings or from the seeds. Next, get a soil test for your garden. This will let you know the fertility, nature of the soil (whether it is acidic, basic or neutral) and the type of fertilizers needed. The soil should be perfectly suitable for the growth of the plants you choose. If you keep in mind the above mentioned things, you will ensure a good harvest for the season. It’s all about orchid…
Now, is about my second impression. It come when I see the drawing deeply. What I got? I can see two side of human face in that drawing. How amazing…this is like mind test and also can teach us how to read a drawing. But when we get in the our life, this is important. Not about the drawing but the symbolic about it. It is same as the English quote “Don’t judge the book by it’s cover. I think, many people know about this quote. It’s very important. Why? When you see someone who is unknown people, your impression about him or her must be good or bad. It is depend on his behavior and personality. What I mean of that is when you know someone, really know them but actually there was something about them we don’t know well. About his unique behavior, special skill in work may be and may be his has big problem. To be a good friend, we must be a good listener. How to become a good listener? We must listen all the problem and . we should know it so we can help them when there is crisis in their mind. Make our mind part of their life problem.
The conclusion is the principal that I use that is “ Don’t judge the book by it’s cover ’ can be use in the principal to known someone. Actually what we look to someone physical is not symbol of their inner yet. So we must try to dig the true of themselves, in term to know them well. Perhaps we should done it over and over to get the valuable true.
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Fan Fiction (Transformers 3)
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Synopsis of Transformers 2 (Revenge of the Fallen)
Two years have passed since young Sam Witwicky…
Synopsis of Transformers 2 (Revenge of the Fallen)(view changes)
Two years have passed since young Sam Witwicky saved the universe from a decisive battle between warring races of robotic aliens. Despite his extreme heroics, Sam is still an average teenager with everyday anxieties about heading to college, leaving behind his girlfriend Mikaela and separating from his parents for the first time. Of course there is the additional burden of trying to explain his departure to his newest friend and guardian robot, Bumblebee. For Sam the goal is to lead a normal university lifestyle, but to do that, he must ignore his destiny. While Sam has done his best to put the conflict at Mission City behind him and return to his daily routine, the battle between the Autobots and Decepticons, although a top secret incident, has instigated many changes. Sector 7 has since been disbanded and its most loyal soldier, Agent Simmons, summarily dismissed. In its place, a new agency, NEST, has been created. Utilizing experienced field commanders like Lennox and Epps, NEST seeks to work side by side with the Autobots to avoid another deadly confrontation with the Decepticons.
Unfortunately National Security Advisor Theodore Galloway possesses little foresight to fully comprehend the inexorable dangers which abound. Driven to gain control of every defense organization, along with their potential for power, and at the same time do away with what he sees as a frivolous government bureau, Galloway endeavors to terminate NEST, believing that any threat of war has long since passed. It is his conviction that humans share no vested interest in the Autobots’ dispute with the Decepticons. Just as life is about to fall neatly into place at Sam’s new school, adapting to a new, albeit pushy, roommate, Leo and an equally pushy but much more attractive new acquaintance, Alice , Sam suddenly becomes distracted by visions flashing across his brain like thunderbolts. Fearful that he is suffering from the dementia that plagued his grandfather, Sam keeps his visions a secret until he can no longer ignore the messages and symbols filtering through his mind.
Despite his best laid plans, Sam once again finds himself at the center of a tug of war between the Autobots and Decepticons with the fate of the universe at stake. Unbeknownst to Sam, he alone holds the key to the outcome of the struggle between evil and the ultimate power of good. With the help of his friends, his pals in NEST and even his parents, Sam finally learns to embrace the Witwicky birthright, no longer hiding from his family legacy: No sacrifice, no victory!
The transformer movies first and second have been set on Earth where the good Autobots basically try and defend Sam and the humans from the evil Deceptions so to allow humanity their rights of freedom as being sentient beings. That's what makes humans being, you know. Fights in forests with Optimus taking on Megatron, Starscream and that other dude are awesome enough but what we need now is interstellar space battles. Transformers 3 should take place in space as much as possible.
Title: Transformers 3
Author : Nik Mohd Qamarul Shafiq Bin Nik Ahmad Kamil
The great journey of the Autobots has begin. The great leader of Autobots, Optimus Prime has decide to return to his own planet called Cybertron and continue his journey to stop and kill Megaton and the Decepticons with his great warriors, Bumblebee, Ironhide, Ratchet and other Autobots. “Sam, thanks for help in keep me alive to conducted the Autobot and save your planet. Now, I must go and your job has accomplished”, said Optimus to Sam. Sam give big hug to Optimus with the tear eye. NEST collaboration with NASA to prepare a large area as launching pad for Autobots. “This is the day and I leave Earth in safe condition. Now Sam, you jobs is must keep Earth in happiness and peace”, said Optimus to Sam. Autobots has launch perfectly in their spaceship to the space. In the space, Optimus has seen Soundwave hacks into a US satellite. This time, Optimus quickly out from his spaceship and go through to kill Soundwave. Soundwave has transform to robot and said ,“ Decepticons, mobilize”,. And Optimus see Decepticon has surrounded him. “Autobots, roll out”, said Optimus. Autobots out from the spaceship and the battle has begun. In the space battle, Autobots has killed all the Decepticon and Optimus kill Soundwave.
While at Cybertron, Megatron, the leader of the Decepticons with his assistance, Starsream and the Decepticon has been attack by Unicorn, The Shiva of the Universe. Destroyer of Worlds. The biggest bad ass robot there is. Unicron is going to destroy Earth, Cybertron, Solar System to build a large dark area whatever includes the entire robot. Megatron use all his army at Cybertron, the Decepticons to attack the Unicorn. But Unicorn has use his powerful beam and kill the Decepticon like junk. “Starsream, now you go out and find Optimus and all the Autobot and then defeat the Unicorn”, said Megatron to Starsream. “Master, how about you..i make sure that you never die again”, said Starsream. “Just go!..You do not have enough time. If you late, Unicorn will destroy our planet”, command by Megatron. “Now, I will defeat you, ugly robot!”, said Megatron with the all spirit in his body. Megatron has versus Unicorn but Unicorn is very strong and powerful robot. Megatron know that he can’t defeat Unicorn although he use all his energy. But this is the way to slowdown the Unicorn attack. Finally, Megatron dies defeated by Unicorn. For whatever reason his body is cast aside into space and the special part is collected by Unicron, who then turns him into Galvatron, The Giant robot in the solar system.
In that time, Starsream has told Optimus about what happen at Cybertron. Optimus has thinking for a while and the Autobots must take the responsibility to save Cybertron and Solar System. They must search for something to solve this big problem. “We must looking for The Key of Light in this space”, said Optimus. Only The Key of Light can destroy Unicorn. “Bumblebee, you must back to Earth and ask for help..we need more powerful weapon to defeated Unicorn”, command Optimus to Bumblebee. “Skyfire, you are the fastest and I command you to find out The Key of Light”, command Optimus.
In the journey in finding The Key of Light, Bumblebee has meet a good old fashion, Blitzkrieg. He is Unicorn assistance. But Unicorn has fired him because Blitzkrieg disagree with Unicorn when Unicorn want to destroy Earth, Cybertron, Solar System to build a large dark area and active the Suntracker Machine to destroy all the source of light. Blitzkrieg wants to join with Optimus in defeated Unicorn, now it is called Galvatron. “Bumblebee, we must go to Nebula..the last planet in the solar system”, said Blitzkrieg . Bumblebee ask, “Why? Is there any army or robot can defeated Galvatron at that planet”. “No! But at Nebula, we can find what we called it ‘The Key of Light’...With this key we can destroy the damn Galvatron..” said Blitzkrieg.
Now Cybertron is in badly damage. Optimus Prime now lead all the autobots and Decepticons unite to attack Galvatron known as Unicorn. Optimus has attack Unicorn but the incredible intelligence and power by Unicorn is very strong. Earth's leader has launch nuclear missiles into space at Unicron. The missiles are directly attack Unicorn chest. Now, Unicorn has been in little damage. But Optimus is in dangerous condition because he can’t defeated Unicorn. Bumblebee and Blitzkrieg are arrive with The Key of Light. Blitzkrieg has transform and combine together with Optimus and become Rodimus Prime. To avoid any attack from Unicorn in that combined process, The Aerial Bots, Predacons, Dinobots, Ultra Magnus and Shockwave and other small transformers has decide to sacrifice and throw themselves at Unicron. The Key of Light is finally used at the end of the fight when Bumblebee put it in Unicorn chest and twist the key. At the time, Unicron is taken out by a blast of light come from Rodimus Prime blade. Unicron's red eye is blown out as the climax, the shards killing off a few Autobots and Decepticons while we're at it.
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Autobiography
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Dear Madam Ju,
First of all, this is my longest autobiography I ever write in my life about mysel…
Dear Madam Ju,(view changes)
First of all, this is my longest autobiography I ever write in my life about myself so I hope you will satisfied with my written and I do try my best to write it so you will know me well as your new student. My full name is Nik Mohd Qamarul Shafiq Bin Nik Ahmad Kamil. It is a longest name and it makes me difficult when i want to fill in an application form. All my friend just calls me Nik but some my teacher call me Qamarul or Shafiq. To me, I like my friend call me Shafiq because the meaning is moon, because all the words comes from our mouth is a pray for us. For me, I agree for all nickname my friend give to me but it must give a good meaning.
I am the second among my siblings. I have four siblings include me. It is a small family. Before me was my brother. His name is Nik Mohd Qamarul Safwan Bin Nik Ahmad Kamil. His name is same like me just change Shafiq with Safwan. He is 25 years old and just married one year ago. He live at Johor with his wife. His job is a professional inspector welding. His job is checking the weld at the joining process and also welding. Inspector welding is quite dangerous job because sometimes, my brother must do his job in empty oil tank. If there is crack area, he must weld the area. This is the dangerous part and must be running smoothly because in the oil tank, there is oil gas and this gas is very sensitive with heat. Because of this, my brother must follow many safety rules. It is why my brother tell me do not enter in this job. After me was my sister. Her name is Nik Soliha Farhana. She is 21 years old and now she studying at University Malaysia Terengganu (UMT) major in Food Technology. She is active person and always busy with her club and university programs. When she have problem, the first person she went is my mom. It is because in my family only have two females, my mom and my sister. Then my younger brother. Now he is in standard six and taking his UPSR this year. It make him busy with his tuition and school activities. What is special about him is, he likes cooking and he is hardworking boy..always helped my dad at restaurant.
Now I will tell about my dad. He is a businessman and has opened a restaurant. He is very hardworking and workaholic person. He go to work at 7a.m and back to home at 11p.m. He wake up at 6a.m everyday and go to whole market to buy raw source like vegetables, meat, chicken, fish and some spices. All this thing will be use in two or three days. At the restaurant, my dad becomes a chef. He cook many kind of food like chicken rice, beriani rice, nasi lemak, rojak ayam, beef soup and dalcha. At my dad restaurant, there were many kind of food like chicken rice, beriani rice, nasi lemak, rojak ayam, laksa penang, ala kampong cooking, kebab and john bread. I glad and respect him because with his busy life with his work, he knows to separate his life between family and work time. Sometime, when my dad back to home from work, I can see his tired face and I give him massage to make him feel better. I know that with his age at 53 years old, this work is heavy and make him tired. But he tell me, this is his ambition, open his own restaurant with his own money and before this my dad work with my grandfather company as a sales manager. He always give me advices and spirit to move one step further in life. He wants me to be better than him in the future and always be in the family.
Next is about my lovely mom. She is a fully housewife. But in the free time, she always sews. She likes sewing very much. Furthermore, there is a special room for my mum to do her hobby. In that room, there were two sew machine and my mum buy it with her money that her collect every month. When Hari Raya is coming, my mum become very busy because she makes our baju melayu, baju kurung and sometimes curtain. In the night, my mum becomes a teacher to my younger brother. She is very strict when talk about education because she wants all his children success in education and become good person.
Now I will tell about my hobbies. Actually I do not know what my hobbies are but I have many favorite. All I do is about my favorite. In my free time, I always playing my pc games like Professional Evolution Soccer (PES) and strategy game like command and concur. For me, all the games give me satisfaction and it makes me thinking. I also love to watch about technology thing and my favorite channel is mega structure. In mega structure, I will know how the biggest things like building, bridge, track, dam, ship and many more was build and also we can know every step and the accident that happen beside the mega project. It makes me proud with my course, mechanical engineering because we can give big contribution to our community life. ESPN also my favorite channel because I like to know about sport world especially about my favorite football club, Manchester United Football Club (MUFC). There is a room in my cupboard full with Manchester United (MU) stuff like MU jersey, scarf, cap, glass, small pillow, handkerchief, MU badge and many more. And my new favorite is cooking. I start likes cooking when I follow my dad to his restaurant. Firstly, my dad teach me how to make spices beef that use for john bread. After a few weeks, he teach me how to make chicken kebab with special spices. After that, when I go to my dad restaurant, I always help my dad especially in making spices beef and chicken kebab.
During holiday, my family will spent time together either go for picnic, rest at home or travel to island like Perhentian, Redang, Tioman, Pangkor also to other states in local like Kelantan, Johor, Pahang, Negeri Sembilan, Sarawak also to overseas like Indonesia, Singapore, Australia and Philippine. Among the travel, we can relax our mind and also can knowing other country culture. Beside that our family relation become more firm.
About my ambition, I want to be an engineer and that why I choose mechanical engineering as my course studies. Actually, it is hard to talk about ambition because in our country situation, there were many graduate in every year. Sometime, we got a job that no suitable with our certificate. That the situation that I want to get away. I really hope I will be an engineer after I graduate according to my certificate. But when I was a kid, I want to be a pilot because I can drive a plane that why I always eat carrot for my eye. When in form 3, I was changed my ambition to be an engineer because to being a pilot, you must be excellent in every section and as we know pilot always flies and we cannot spend time to our family. Even if I have more money, but I cannot give happiness to my family, it does not mean anything.
Finally, I think this is enough my own autobiography and I hope you will get more details about me in this autobiography. “There is more to you than meets the eye”.
Sincerely,
Nik Mohd Qamarul Shafiq Bin Nik Ahmad Kamil
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Revision of Fiction (The Magical Flower)
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Revision of Fiction (The Magical Flower)
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Alia, Amin and Amirul were to the jungle to make some research about plant in the jungle. In the j…
Alia, Amin and Amirul were to the jungle to make some research about plant in the jungle. In the journey, Alia was found a beautiful flower with very bewitch smell. Alia was plucked the flower and smell it. She decided the take the flower for her research. Suddenly, there was a lady standing in front of them. The lady said, “Don’t take the flower…It is mine. You have takes my flower”. Alia said, “I have found it in that place”. The lady said,” I don’t care…and for your punishment I want live with you and your family in your world”. Alia, Amin and Amirul were shocked.”Hah!”. The mysteries lady was smiling to them. Amin said,” you’re so cute and pretty in doing like that”. Alia, Amin and Amirul were agreed to bring along the mysteries lady to their home. They called the mysteries lady, Ponti.(view changes)
One day, Ponti fall sick. Her body become weak and she always cough repeatedly. Alia took Ponti to a clinic nearby. After the doctor make some check up, he said,” she just a fever. Don’t worry, young lady. I will give her some medical and you must make sure that she always take the medical in time”. Alia take the medical and bring Ponti back to her home. After a week, Ponti fever is not recovered yet. Alia quickly bring Ponti back to his grandfather’s house, Atuk Leman. Because she fell very strange with Ponti’s sickness.
When Atuk Leman look at Ponti condition, he was thinking about something…”that the story is true? If it is true, what should I do?” Atuk was thinking in his mind. Alia look at Atuk Leman and in her face, Atuk Leman knows that she is very worries about what happen to Ponti. In the midnight, in Atuk Leman’s dreaming, his wife has come to him and told that,” My dear, Ponti is our daughter. To save Ponti, you must bring Ponti back to her place. Same that you do to me when I was live with you long time ago”. Atuk Leman wake up from sleep and quickly went to Ponti. He gaze at Ponti face deeply and suddenly a word was out from his mouth “my daughter”, said Atuk Leman to Ponti while his eye in tears.
While, Alia was saw and heard what Atuk Leman said to Ponti. Her eye was become rounded with her mouth was agape. Alia run to her room and she was confused what was happen now. At the tomorrow morning, after they have breakfast, Alia was told what she saw and heard last night to his cousin, Amin. Amin does not believed what was Alia told him. “Are you still dreaming, Alia?”,ask Amin to her with his cynical smile. Alia reached Amin’s hand and went to Atuk Leman was sat at the lazy chair at the front house. “Can I help you, my dear?” ,asked Atuk Leman to Alia and Amin. Alia quickly ask him about last night what he was told to Ponti.
Atuk Leman said “This is the time and I must tell you the truth…Actually, Ponti is your auntie”. Alia and Amin was very shocked with that statement.
Atuk Leman continued, “a long time ago, my friend and I went to a jungle to hunt. In our journey to hunt, suddenly I was smell something very fragrant. I asked my friend about that smell and they said they not smell anything. The smell was so engross until I was followed the smell. Suddenly, I saw a beautiful flower and I sure that the smell have come from the flower. I plucked the flower and smell it. It is true and I smell it while my eye was closed. When I open it, I saw a lady in front of me. She is very beautiful. Her eye is brightly shinning with a long black hair. The smell was so bewitch make me fall in love with her. In that time, she was in white baju kurung. After that moment, I always go to the jungle that the place I found the flower and meet her”.
Alia asked,” so, what happen next and where is my grandmother? Atuk Leman answered it,” After three month, I decide to marry her, your grandmother, Sofea. We life together in this house with happiness and peaceful with the engross smell is always with her. But it is not longer. Sofea suddenly fall sick. She does not eat anything and his body becomes weak. In that time, Sofea want me to take her to the flower place. I quickly take her to the place and when we arrived at that place. In that time, Sofea eye was closed. Suddenly Sofea was floating with his body was shinning with white shine. Sofea stand in front of me and told me that actually, she and the flower is very related to each other. That why, when I followed you to your home in a long times, I getting sick and my body become weak. I must smell the fragrance of the flower everyday. On that time, I know his condition and Sofea want me to let her go. But I don’t want let him disappeared in my life and I don’t want to lose it. After that, I decided to permit Sofea live in that place and I will always come to see her”.
Amin was asking, “What about Ponti, Atuk? Atuk Leman answered,” that is my fault. On the time I decided to permit Sofea live at the place, I doesn’t know that Sofae was pregnant”. “So, what must we do to Ponti now? Her condition is bad now,” ask Alia. Atuk Leman said, “We must take Ponti to the place you all have found her, at the jungle”.
Atuk Leman, Alia and Amin quickly take Ponti to the place. After a few hours, they arrived at that place and Atuk Leman was lay Ponti at the ground. Suddenly, a white shine have come to Ponti and make some treatment to Ponti. After a few moment, Ponti’s eye was opened and her hand was moving. Ponti get up and come toward us. She was hug Alia and crying because she know that she does not live with them anymore because she is in the different world.
Sofea has come to Atuk Leman and say,” I’m so very sorry because I did not tell you that in that time, I was pregnant Ponti. That why, Ponti’s instinct is more like normal human. She cans life in two different worlds. But in the same time, she needs the fragrance of the flower to make her in the good health”.
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Excerpt 1
“Honey, when you’re drinking martinis and your martinis glass is full o…
Excerpt 1(view changes)
“Honey, when you’re drinking martinis and your martinis glass is full of tears, you gotta ask yourself, is the Universe trying to tell me something?”Said Julie.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer give the metaphor that she try to describe something happen must be a reason.
Excerpt 2
I went out to run some errands and when I returned a few hours later, my voice mail was flashing like crazy. I knew all my girlfriends would be calling to ask what to wear that night. I listened to my messages.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer again give the metaphor and hype reaction because she said ”my voice mail was flashing like crazy”.
Excerpt 3
Can I be super-duper honest and admit something tre's terrible? I wasn't paying that much attention to this very tense conversation anymore because something happened while I was talking to Charlie that I never expected.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer was describe the monolog conflict and the character.
Excerpt 4
The entire time I was thought to Charlie a very handsome boy was making what I can only describe as very Brazilian eye contact from right behind Charlie’s left ear.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer try to show that Julie is fall in love with Charlie but she try to hide in the Charlie’s eye.
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