Excerpt 1
“Honey, when you’re drinking martinis and your martinis glass is full of tears, you gotta ask yourself, is the Universe trying to tell me something?”Said Julie.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer give the metaphor that she try to describe something happen must be a reason.
Excerpt 2
I went out to run some errands and when I returned a few hours later, my voice mail was flashing like crazy. I knew all my girlfriends would be calling to ask what to wear that night. I listened to my messages.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer again give the metaphor and hype reaction because she said ”my voice mail was flashing like crazy”.
Excerpt 3
Can I be super-duper honest and admit something tre's terrible? I wasn't paying that much attention to this very tense conversation anymore because something happened while I was talking to Charlie that I never expected.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer was describe the monolog conflict and the character.
Excerpt 4
The entire time I was thought to Charlie a very handsome boy was making what I can only describe as very Brazilian eye contact from right behind Charlie’s left ear.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer try to show that Julie is fall in love with Charlie but she try to hide in the Charlie’s eye.
“Honey, when you’re drinking martinis and your martinis glass is full of tears, you gotta ask yourself, is the Universe trying to tell me something?”Said Julie.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer give the metaphor that she try to describe something happen must be a reason.
Excerpt 2
I went out to run some errands and when I returned a few hours later, my voice mail was flashing like crazy. I knew all my girlfriends would be calling to ask what to wear that night. I listened to my messages.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer again give the metaphor and hype reaction because she said ”my voice mail was flashing like crazy”.
Excerpt 3
Can I be super-duper honest and admit something tre's terrible? I wasn't paying that much attention to this very tense conversation anymore because something happened while I was talking to Charlie that I never expected.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer was describe the monolog conflict and the character.
Excerpt 4
The entire time I was thought to Charlie a very handsome boy was making what I can only describe as very Brazilian eye contact from right behind Charlie’s left ear.
Title : Bergdorf Blondes
Writer : Plum Sykes
My Comment :The writer try to show that Julie is fall in love with Charlie but she try to hide in the Charlie’s eye.